Elevator Pitch No. 3
Reflection: I received no feedback on the second one, but I thought that I needed to add a few things. The first being give a price for the service, I added an estimate because I don’t know what price would be. Also explain what the service is because I did an okay job the first couple times. To improve this, I explained why my service was sort of different to others. I think that all three points were true as I knew the pitch almost like the back of my hand, it was smoother, and I was not afraid of the camera like I was the first time.