Elevator Pitch No. 2

Reflection

From the feedback the most important was maybe give a pricing option as it would give some idea as to cost. What surprised me the most was that this need was seen as something that many people would use. I thought that the most useful feedback was that I need to show how it is going to meet the unmet need that a customer is going to have. 

Changes 

I made it longer to include how it is going to fit the unmet need. I haven't though of price range so I didn't include it but gave an idea as to something that would be a low cost.