Elevator Pitch No. 3
Reflection: I received
no feedback on the second one, but I thought that I needed to add a few things.
The first being give a price for the service, I added an estimate because I don’t
know what price would be. Also explain what the service is because I did an okay
job the first couple times. To improve this, I explained why my service was
sort of different to others. I think that all three points were true as I knew
the pitch almost like the back of my hand, it was smoother, and I was not
afraid of the camera like I was the first time.
Hey, Ishan! I truly appreciated your enthusiasm in this pitch. You even went about providing solutions to potential problems your customers would face. The different questions and concerns clearly indicates that you care about your consumer's needs and are willing to do something about it. The only thing I would suggest is maybe providing some sort of price quotient for the product and/or service. Otherwise, keep up the good work!
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